Dragon Tail – Chapter 40!

No, no, you’re NOT DREAMING! It’s here!! Open-mouthed
Yes, Chapter 40 is here. This isn’t the final chapter, I know I estimated it to be 40 chapters… but that’s an ESTIMATE! I bet it’ll be 41 and a prologue. So next time I post Dragon Tail… that’s it… it’s over. Sad
Just going over this to make sure it sounds right… earkay… all checked out and ready to go! Open-mouthed Enjoy.
(ZOMG IT DISAPPEAREDED! Yes, as Dragon Tail is now finished, I need this off my Space. Sowwy.)
Sorry if I made yourself feel disgusting… but Sin REALLY hates you. Understandable. Tongue out
Anyway, anything you don’t like? Anything that I could change… any spelling mistakes or poots that I made along the way? TELLZ ME! Open-mouthed
Hopefully you liked that chapter… but only one more to go… and that’s it… Sad
I’d better be off, but I’ll see yous later! Open-mouthed

6 thoughts on “Dragon Tail – Chapter 40!

  1. Right FINALLY I’m back!!
     I LOVED this chapter!!! And OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TWIST ALERT!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!! Well done!! I really did not see the Lord being Blizzard’s commander, or the fact that he was the one that killed Blizzard so WELL DONE!!!!!!

  2. Right for some reason, when I pressed enter to go down a line, the comment got randomly added, so here’s another one! I thought the bit with Thunder fighting Rage was so INTENSE, honestly I was on the edge of my seat the WHOLE time, and I was willing Thunder to win!! I was so worried for Thunder and I was SO GLAD that Whirlwind helped him!! And then when Ifri and Shadow came I was SO GLAD to see them! That whole scene, including the bit with the laser weapons that were more powerful than the humans’ Vampire swords really show the closeness between all the friends, I think it’s great to see that again! And did we learn Dimari has a sixth sense earlier or not? I can’t remember! Sorry…sometimes my memory is useless!
    Nagira is AWESOME!!! So gentle and caring, just WOW! Great character there! And you know what, even though we only meet him in chapter 40, near the end of the story, he’s still as developed as all the other characters! So WELL DONE there! 🙂
    And the last paragraph OH MY GOD! WOW!!! I think that was just you, pouring out all your emotions about humans being prejudiced (don’t know if that’s the right word) to the Dragons and Guira! OH MY GOD seriously that is an AWESOME paragraph!!
    OK, I have to go, but I’ll see ya later! 🙂
    Anyway I really enjoyed this chapter

  3. Speckeroonie! 😀
    Glad you liked it! 😀 TWISTS FTW!! That was the plot the whole way through the story, I was trying to give TINY hints at it all along, while throwing in really obvious red herrings. 😀
    I was trying to push myself to make this chapter as intense as possible, what, with the start, where Whirlwind is all alone, creeping through the palace halls… spookyishly tense! And then the fight between Thunder and Rage, that was intense… and so it goes on. 😀 So I’m glad I actually managed that! 😀 And yeah, Whirlwind mentioned that Meriva Dragons have an amazing sixth sense, just as he met Dimari for the first time. 🙂
    I knew Nagira right from the start, and I was trying to find somewhere to put him! I specially changed the storyline so that Whirlwind would crash into the ocean to be saved by Nagira, JUST so I could get him in! 😀 Whirlwind was originally going to dodge Rage’s attack, and fight back to stun him long enough to get away, and then hide in a very secluded cave for a few days. 🙂 I don’t think Nagira is THAT well developed, you barely know him, really. 😛
    And yup, I was completely "in character" for that last paragraph. I kind of knew what Whirlwind would want to say to the humans, and I actually believe that, anyway. It’s SO TRUE! I seriously bet all of this would happen if we found another planet with ANY alien race inhabiting it. Call me emo if you REALLY want, but I’m SO NOT! 😛 Would an emo say CAKE, SPECK or MOOT (to name a few) and post videos of pratting around with Arnie faces, machine guns and melon bombs on GMod?! 😛
    Speck, I had better be going. I’ll see yous later! 😀

  4. Yeah this chapter is AWESOMELY INTENSE, I LOVE IT!!! And spookyishly is an ACE WORD!!!
    And you know I’m not going to call you an emo! Because you are SO NOT an emo!

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