Dragon Tail – Chapter 37!

A HA! I HAVE EET! Open-mouthed
 
Yes, after much waiting, I’ve finally finished it. It’s a bit big, so I might have to split it over two entries again. But ah well. Smile
 
Anyhoo, here you go!
 

(ZOMG IT DISAPPEAREDED! Yes, as Dragon Tail is now finished, I need this off my Space. Sowwy.)

 

ZOMG, it fits in one entry! Awesome! Open-mouthed
 
So… what did you think? I think there’s something wrong with it, it’s just hard to put my finger on it. Either that, or I’m being paranoid and constantly thinking about how hard it was to write towards the end.
 
Anyhoo, hope you enjoyed this one! I’ll try my hardest to get Chapter 38 out faster than this! See yous later. Smile

2 thoughts on “Dragon Tail – Chapter 37!

  1. Hey how are you?
     
    You are being so PARANOID!!!!! There is NOTHING wrong with this chapter!!!!!!! It was FANTASIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
    Um yeah…you know I cried when I read chapter 36? Well…um…I cried again!!!!!! HOW DO YOU DO THAT SERIOUSLY??? It is really difficult to make me cry over books, I mean before I read DT, I had never cried over a book before, and then you write two chapters in a row that reduce me to tears! How do you do it??? My mum says I can be an emotional little Madam when I want to be, but seriously, there’s something about Dragon Tail that makes me cry!! (That’s a good thing though!) I think it’s because the Character Development is so ACE that when the charcters feel sadness, I feel sadness and the same with other emotions, and that made me cry! As well as the fact that this chapter was a tearful one!
     
    I thought you wrote all of the chapter BEAUTIFULLY!!! 🙂 It was so sensitively written, which is such a rare thing in books! I mean a lot of writers just like…what’s the wording I’m looking for…sort of blurt it out non stop…if that makes sense, so in an emotional scene like this, there is NO EMOTION!! But DT is just like yeah, WOW, EMOTION ALL THE TIME!!!!!!! It’s GREAT!!!!!! I thought the first part of the chapter where Whirlwind was telling everyone about Ice and then he just broke down in tears (I need a better phrase for that) was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO UPSETTING, but it was FANTASTIC because it was so sensitively written and it was just fantastic!!!! 😀 And I really did not expect Blaze to be the one to comfort Whirlwind! Nice, well not a twist, but a surprise there! I really did not expect that, which is good, because I LOVE unexepcted things in stories! 🙂 And this whole chapter is AMAZING because you really do see the depth of Whirlwind’s and Emerald’s love for each other, which develops the whole plot of the story and also the characters themselves, making more AWESOME character development! 😀
     
    The second part of the chapter with Dimari was really shocking! Because I finally realised how much his temper could escalate! And it really developed his character too, which is really FANTASTIC, because we learnt about how self-conscious he is, I mean we already knew he was self-conscious, but we finally learnt to what extent that self-consciousness was present…if that makes sense! But again AWESOME emotion in there, I could feel the anger SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH! And of course ACE character development too! 🙂
     
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I LOVED the last part of the chapter!!!!!!!!! Seriously it was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And so emotional too!!!!! Oh WOW you could feel the love that Emerald and Whirldwind have for each other SOOOO MUCH!!!!!! And they finally get a family together!!!! Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!! And you wrote the scene absolutely perfectly!!! Trust me!!! I CRIED AGAIN!!!!!!!! Lol! I don’t know if I was supposed to cry, but I did, with HAPPINESS, because Whirlwind gets a family!!!!! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh my God I’m so soppy!!!!! I can’t help it though!!!!! I’m a soppy little Madam when it comes to love and romance!!! So that just made me cry!!!! 😀 So you made me cry TWICE in this chapter! Well done!!! But seriously that is an AWESOME chapter Carl, honestly!!! 🙂 ANd is that bit at the end about losing everything foreshadowig the future??? Because that has me intrigued….:)
     
    Anyway, like I said, AWESOME chapter there! And I can’t wait till the next one!!!!!!!! 😀
     
    Now I have to go 😦 but I’ll see you soon 🙂
     
    Love Em xxx -hugs- 

  2. Speck!
     
    Glad you liked it! And yes, I am being paranoid! Work has screwed me up, and I keep thinking I’m in "work" writing style, instead of "Advanced Improvisation and Character Development V2"! Yes, I am so sad. 😛 But that is the style I use! I improvise the story without planning, and change things as I go along, and think of the plot at least twice as fast as I write it! So, as I finish the 20th chapter (assuming there are 40 chapters) I should know how the story is going to end! And I have a very high concentration on character development, so it makes it "Advanced Improvisation and Character Development V2"! The V2 is just for effect. 😛
     
    How DO I do that?! I have no idea myself, to be honest! I could never cry over a book, but then again, I am a dude. 😛
     
    And yes, I know what you mean about some people just throwing words onto a page and not caring about them. They’ll inspect them so they sound "good enough", but a lot never go to the "awesome" level. I try to get there, sometimes it backfires, but sometimes it goes really well! Like that buildup in tension before you get to know that Emerald has laid dragon eggs! I craft my work, not just throw it down and say "ah, that’ll do". Unless it’s REALLY hard. Then sometimes I HAVE to say "that’ll do". 😦
     
    Blaze is more than you think. 🙂 He’s a Wyvern, yes, and he is a very strong fighter, but Wyverns are really nice towards their friends. And Dimari is the same, but he has his "angry" moments. 🙂
     
    And… with all that punctuation and caps at the end, I assume you REALLY liked the ending! 😀 And you assume that the dragons will lose their world to the humans?! You’re so, so cruel. 😦
     
    Anyspeck, thank you for the comment! I’ll see yous later! 🙂

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