Dragon Tail – Chapter 23!

Alright! I did it! I said it would be here, and I DID IT! Cuz usually, you know, my internet goes or I forget because I’ve been overusing my 360 or something. Open-mouthed
 
I got Office 2007 (by legal means, of course, wink wink…) and it’s really good! I like the new colour scheme, and the way it tries to imitate a Mac. Kind of. The "Ribbon" is slightly annoying to get used to, but it just looks so… COOL! Like, really professional! Elegant! That’s the word!
The best part of it is the live word count in the bottom left. Well… NEARLY live. When I loaded up Dragon Tail, it took about 20 seconds to count the words! I mean, for a human that’s be stupidly insane, but a MACHINE takes that long to do it? Ah well. Right now, it has 60,013 words, which is actually LESS than earlier today, because I deleted some words. Obviously.
 
Okay! It’s checked and all set to be posted! Just one thing… nah, I’ll tell you afterwards. Open-mouthed Just in case you ignore half of the chapter trying to find the answer to the question.
 
Here you go!
 

(Removed, cuz of fear of plagiarism. Call me paranoid.)

 

 
NoteYeah… whoaho! There’s somethin’ in the air… whoaho, there’s somethin’ in the air… whoaho… there’s someth…Note
*ahem* Hi! *cheesy grin*
 
Oooh… just as you’ve been relaxing and getting increasingly tense, then BANG!! THIS chapter appears! I thought that was quite a good one, but that’s ME, the one who wrote it! So, what did you think?
Oh, and the question I was gonna ask earlier: can you guess which line REALLY made me cringe when I read it? I bet you can. I think…
Anyhoo, any questions/comments/suggestions/grammatical errors because of my stupid typing or stupid brain? Just post them into that BIIG box below! Thank youu!
 
Bye bye!
 
 
 
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6 thoughts on “Dragon Tail – Chapter 23!

  1. WHAT my internet only poxted the first few characters of my comment!!!
     
    I’m sorry Carl, I’m so tired tonight that I can’t concentrate on your chapter! 😦 But I PROMISE to read it tomorrow!! I PROMISE!!! So I’ll leave you a comment tomorrow on it and the videos too!
     
    I really am sorry but I feel like if I’m tired then I won’t take your chapter in, so I better read it when I’m fully awake!
     
    I’ll read and comment tomorrow I PROMISE so I’ll see you then!
     
    Love Em xxx -hugs-

  2. That’s eekay! It’s always better if you can concentrate and take it in rather than it just going straight over your head. This one’s a pretty important one, too. If you skipped this one/couldn’t concentrate on this one, you would probably go "What the hell… who’s ******, I thought ** *** ****!"
     
    So that’s eekay, I’ll probably have the 23rd chapter by tomorrow, too! Earspeck then!

  3. Hey Carl, how are you??
     
    WOWNESS, JUST AWESOME WOWNESS!!!! 😀 This chapter is GREAT and is a break from the character development that you’ve been focusing on for the last few chapters. I love the character development, don’t get me wrong, that really is your strongest point, but I like a bit of action once in a while in a chapter, so this chapter was really good because it showed variety between what the chapters focus on (does that make sense, or am I babbling?) In the first paragraph I thought the description was absolutely FANTABULOUSLY AWESOME!!!! There were some really original and imaginative descriptions in there and that hooked me right from the start! I loved the way you used "chronically" as well that was really original and it fitted in absolutely PERFECTLY!!! In fact, I don’t think I’ve read a book that uses chronically like that before, so well done for writing the first book (that I’ve read) that uses it like that! I loved the fight scene I could really imagine it, the description and action in this chapter was ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!!!!! I love this chapter and from what I can see there are no grammatical errors 🙂 which means that this chapter is ABAOLUTELY PERFECT!!!!! THANK YOU CARL!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
     
    Right as for the line that made you cringe, I think it was:…EITHER…
     
    "He sniffed it, and then licked it off slowly, with his long, black tongue. I cringed, and shuddered. He was disgusting…"
     
    OR…
     
    "At this point, I felt like I was nearly drowning in my own blood."
     
    So am I right, or entirely wrong??
     
    Ok I have to go but I’ll see  you soon 
     
    Love Em xxx -hugs- 
     

  4. Speck!
     
    Thank you for teh comment! Ya, I thought that the action was due back in this chapter. 😀 It was weird, because I choreographed it IN MY BRAIN before I even started writing it! Don’t ask how I did that, because I really have NO IDEA!
     
    And I just love that word, "Chronically"! I was gonna use "horribly", but it didn’t fit, so that’s where Word’s synonym menu comes in handy. 😀  Glad you liked it! 😀
     
    And you got that line bang on, it was "He sniffed it, and then licked it off slowly, with his long, black tongue. I cringed, and shuddered." I mean, come on, man, oooh! That’s a pretty effective line! It’s one of those lines that kinda makes a small vision appear in your head, and it’s really vivid! You know?
     
    Speckeriffic! I’m gonna be posting my next entry now. Bye!

  5. Hey, glad you liked my comment! 🙂
     
    I know exactly what you mean with that line making you cringe because it’s vivid and makes a vision appear in your head, because that is EXACTLY what happened to me, it was weird and it really made me cringe and not many things actually do that, I love blood, guts and gore usually 😛 lol
     
    Anyway I’m going to comment on your next blog entry
     
    See you later
     
    Love Em xx -hugs-

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