(Removed, cuz of fear of plagiarism. Call me paranoid.)
So, what do ya think? I’ve noticed that there’s less action in these two, I dunno if it bored you, and if it did then I’ll try and fix it. Don’t worry! There’ll be a lot of action later on!
So yeah, any suggestions or comments? Has it gone too soft for you? Or was this peaceful section a nice breather?