Dragon Tail – Chapter 20!

ARSE ARSE ARSE! Sorry dudes, I was meant to get this here for YESTERDAY, but my FRIGGIN INTERNET CUT OUT ALL NIGHT! I was on Xbox LIVE, and then I went to have my tea, and when I came back, "CONNECTION LOST! Please reconnect to Xbox LIVE!" And then my internet kept flickering all night!

Piece of crap… anyway! Here they are, a bit late, but I promised they’d be here! Just give me a tick to check them, see if any retardedly stupid mistakes are still there…

Okay, that seems fine! I just gotta tell you before I post it, Dragon Tail has now got a shock 56,861 words! No, really! No joke! As soon as I add another 3,139 words, my Novelette will be a NOVEL! DOODY!

Okay, here you go…

(Removed, cuz of fear of plagiarism. Call me paranoid.)

 

 

Alright, onto the next entry for Chapter 21!

3 thoughts on “Dragon Tail – Chapter 20!

  1. Carl I swear you are trying to make me cry!!!!! Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that chapter was sooooo sweet!!! I loved it, it’s my favourite one so far!!! (I haven’t read the next one yet!) The description in Emerald’s story and about her sculpture was fantastic, I could really imagine it!!!! And as for the character development…WOW! Just WOW! Whirlwind’s words to Emerald were the sweetest words I’ve ever heard, seriously! Wow! What Whirlwind said, about having your friends and always being there for each other basically sums up how I feel about life, so I could really relate to that! 🙂 I love how Whirlwind’s and Emerald’s friendship is developing too, I think it’s so sweet! And just adds to the WOWNESS factor of the character development! I don’t think I’ve read a story where the characters are developing so much and I’ve read A LOT of books! This is one of the best stories I’ve read in my life, and I’M NOT JUST SAYING IT I MEAN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok? The way the characters are developing it’s just fantastic at the moment and the plot is keeping me absolutely HOOKED, I now want to find out what Emerald’s story is and how the characters develop more! I love it Carl, I’m completely serious and I’m not just saying it cuz you wrote I’m saying it cuz I mean it!
     
    OK, onto the next chapter 😀
     
    Love Em xxx -hugs-

  2. Hehe, yeah! I am trying to make EVERYONE cry! It feels so great, just writing down some words in an order that makes people’s feelings come out… it’s brilliant! I never knew I could do it before!
     
    I’m glad you liked this one, because I was a bit worried about it, for some reason. And that’s my main focus, as you already probably know, the character development. It’s just like what I was saying to myself a few days ago about Assassins Creed, "It’s all well and good that you’ve got a great storyline and insane graphics, but then you just had to go and RUIN it with several boring characters that have crap voices, and with the dumbest AI imaginable!" I’ll write about that in my next entry, but it’s true when talking about a book, you can have an awesome storyline, and then your characters ruin it. They have no personality, no soul, nothing! They’re impossible to connect with! And nearly EVERYONE does that! That’s why I focus on my characters as much as my story, probably MORE. I want the reader to stay connected with all my characters, AND be gripped by the storyline at the same time! It also helps if you throw in a heavy dose of originality, because if it’s not original, you KNOW what is going to happen.
     
    Do you have any idea what will happen? Exactly! You don’t! And that’s what makes a good story, it makes the reader PEE THEMSELVES to find out what happens next!
     
    And you really mean that it’s the BEST you’ve EVER read in your LIFE? How ma… wait, I was just gonna ask how many books you’ve read but the answer’s right there! A LOT! Dude, I’m flattered! 😀 Not many can do that! Thanks!
     
    Okay, I’m gonna read the comment for Chapter 21! Earspeck!

  3. Glad you liked my comment 😀
     
    Can’t wait for the next chapter
     
    And I meant everything I wrote in that comment!
     
    See you soon and Specky Christmas-speck!
     
    Love Em xxx -hugs-

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