Dragon Worlds – Chapter 19!

(Removed, cuz of fear of plagiarism. Call me paranoid.)

 

Okay! Again, any comments/suggestions/other mongificated thingies are welcome, as always. Open-mouthed And now I must go and work on this crappy castle. Bye!

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3 thoughts on “Dragon Worlds – Chapter 19!

  1. Hey Carl!!!!!!!! How are you??????
     
    I’m hyper 😀 (nothing new there then) 🙂 and THANK YOU for TWO chapters!!!! 😀
     
    Chapter 18:
    I love this chapter, I love the description of DracoSkaar and his story, that was my favourite part. One thing about that though, you said he was the most "looked-up to dragon" or something like that, I can’t remember exactly, but I think admired sounds better, or something along those lines. That was just a quick little suggestion to help  you 🙂 Anyway, I did find this chapter confusing, but thanks for putting in the explanations cuz without then I wouldn’t have got what you were talking about, so the explanations were good cuz they took away the confusion. The religion sounds ACE by the way! I mean Gods that tell you they’re not Gods WOW!!!!!!!!!!
     
    Chapter 19:
    My FAVOURITE chapter so far!!!! Didn’t you know I was gonna say that??? 🙂 AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW it was such a sweet chapter, I loved it!!!!!!!!! Emerald is telepathic too!! Never saw that coming, Nice one!! 🙂 I loved her stor about the Spider too, I thought that was really sweet! I just like her whole character persona now, it’s really developed well and I can really relate to her (for some reason unknown to me) and imagine her. I love how Whirlind’s character is developing too, we’re starting to see a deeper side to him which is really good. Oh yeah and I can’t wait to see Whirlwind meet DracoSkaar in the Dark Realm (is that right??) I really want to see what happens. Oh yeah, and are Emerald and Whirlwind gonna fall in love (or am I just being soppy??) and if so, I hope it’s soon!!! 😀 Great two chapters Carl, love them!!! 🙂 You’re a star and you should think about getting this published! And when I get your story off Ant, I PROMISE to give it to other people to read 🙂 cuz you can trust me!!! 🙂 (unlike Ant, who I can’t trust to bring back your story) Oh well, I’ll just have to ZOP him for punishment!!!!!!
     
    Other Stuff:
    Right, the fret/threat thing, see my comment on your 3DS Max blog entry if you haven’t already 🙂
     
    Oh yeah and you know that song that I last put on my blog (Accidentally In Love) then I asked you Strawberry/Vanilla/Chocolate Ice cream?? Well you picked Strawberry right?? Well, I’ve only just noticed that in the song it mentions strawberry ice cream 🙂 The line is "I Surrender To The Strawberry Ice Cream" 😀 what a cool line!!!!! 😀 Right??? And I think it’s more than a coincidence that you mentioned strawberry ice cream and the song did!!! 😀
     
    Anyway I’d better go, so I’ll see you later!!
     
    Strawberryeespeck 😀 😛
     
    Love Em xxx -hugs-

  2. What the hell? It didn’t post my comment! Dumb thing, now I’ve gotta write it all again!
     
    EESPECK! Thank you for teh commentz!
     
    Now hang on… lemme see that mistake… most looked-up to… Ah! That’s genius! *makes change* Thank you! I didn’t spot that one, and nor did Word! And I was thinking the same thing about the confusion (I understood it, but that’s cuz I WROTE it) so I might have a look at that later, and refine it a little bit.
     
    I’m glad that you can see the characters developing. I mean, Whirlwind’s a peaceful dragon, but sometimes his dark side (and his true power) can come out, and he gets angry at certain things, like pain, and when he or his friends are threatened. Emerald’s peaceful, too, and has a very strong mind. She cares for her friends, too.
     
    Oh, and DracoSkaar isn’t what you’d expect him to be. Oh, crap! No more! No more from me about DracoSkaar! And I’m not gonna tell you ANYTHING about the relationship about Whirlwind and Emerald. You might be a little disappointed.
     
    Oh, ya, and I read your fret/threat comment, hehehe! 😀 And about the song, really? Haha! I never noticed! My internet was playing up that day, as well, so I couldn’t watch it! Maybe the video travelled through into my head while I answered the questions! 😀 I’ll have to re-listen to it. 😀
     
    Earspeck! Bye bye!

  3. Heya Carl
     
    Glad you like the comments 🙂 AND I got your story back off Ant 🙂 so I can now give it to other people to read tomorrow 😀
     
    I want some strawberry ice cream! I haven’t had any in ages and I’m listening to Accidentally In Love so it’s making me think of strawberry ice cream!
     
    Anyway I’m going to read your next blog now
     
    Love Em xxx -hugs-

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