Alright, you’ve waited long enough. I think. Why, d’ya wanna wait some more? Hehe. I’ve got a good feeling about these chapters.
Now, I never EVER think anything of mine is any good unless others say it’s good. It’s just how I work. But the first paragraph in Chapter 2, DAMN that’s good!
I know, I promised 3 chapters, but it’s like, midnight, and I’m relatively tired to a certain extent that I can’t perfectly explain… Anyway, the 4th chapter has a dumbass problem with extreme wordiness. Word just will not stop flying up my ass about "WORDINESS".
Well, okay, it IS pretty wordy. I mean, like, 6 words to explain something that could have been easily explained in the same way as 2 words. So don’t worry! I’ll have Chapter 4 to ya soon.
Okay, I’ll get to it. Here ya go:
(Removed, cuz of fear of plagiarism. Call me paranoid.)
D’ya like the one-shot lines at the end of every chapter? That’s my style, dude.
Well, I hope you enjoyed that, and I hope I’ve kept ya tense. Feel free to comment me on what you think/what I should improve, etc.
Eekay! See ya, dude!